Post by Andrew on Nov 25, 2007 13:17:44 GMT -5
I wrote this piece in the beginning of September and received little to no feedback. Personally, I think it's one of my better pieces, but I'd like to see what others think.
Won
An original by Andrew Workman
There's nothin' we can do
The deed has already been done.
Bodies lie strewn about
The war was fought and won.
All the souls of the dead
make their way to the light,
and if you look into the stars,
you'll see their gory fight.
Laughing.
Screaming.
Crying.
You'll see their gory fight.
Will they make it to the books
when years have come to pass?
Or will they only be remembered
at weekly Sunday mass?
There's nothin' we can do
The deed has already been done.
Bodies lie strewn about
The war was fought...
And won.
Won
An original by Andrew Workman
There's nothin' we can do
The deed has already been done.
Bodies lie strewn about
The war was fought and won.
All the souls of the dead
make their way to the light,
and if you look into the stars,
you'll see their gory fight.
Laughing.
Screaming.
Crying.
You'll see their gory fight.
Will they make it to the books
when years have come to pass?
Or will they only be remembered
at weekly Sunday mass?
There's nothin' we can do
The deed has already been done.
Bodies lie strewn about
The war was fought...
And won.
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